Feedback

In class we showed our work (in progress) to eachother. This enabled our classmates to give us feedback and constructive criticisms which would help us achieve a better mark. Here are our comments:

Many of these comments were very understandable and we knew that we had to improve these straight away. This encouraged us to refilm parts that were not right and fix any imperfections. We aim to improve these by editing our clips so that they flow better and we have slightly changed the script for refilming so that it is easier to understand.

Furthermore, as this was shown to our peers halfway through editing it meant that we had not yet got to the climax so the audience had not yet seen many horror elements. We have now fixed this by filming the ending and are in the process of editing.