Pitch

In order to get feedback of our film ideas we presented the class with our film plot, target audience, chosen institution, the mise-en-scene we would use and our chosen age certificate. We had to read out our ideas or make a powerpoint showing our research and our decisions that we made.

This is what was included in our pitch

This is me (middle) presenting our pitch 

 

Here the worry of lighting was mentioned to us. However, I will try to overcome this by filming at around 5 o'clock when it is only starting to get dark so that we will be able to see everything or we could film on a cloudy day but edit it to make it seem that it is closer to night time.

A weakness was brought up about having smashed glass, although we did not discuss it to the class I have taken in the consideration as shown on our pitch sheet. I think that this would be a great opportunity to show signs of a struggle. Furthermore, make-up would not be an issue as I have access to stage fake blood and I can easily make someone look dead with normal make-up.

Again the idea of lighting difficulties was raised here. An opportunity that was raised was that there are lots of chances to engage the audience. I think we can do this by using modern day social media as a way that the group of friends find out the information as the audience will be able to relate to it more. I think that the fact that there will still be blood on the crime scene will not be unrealistic because in the story line I will make it so that not many people have heard it. For example, I came up with the idea that an unknown user posts onto the victims Facebook wall (as an example) saying something like 'R.I.P' and a location set. Therefore not many people, if any, would have known that the victim is there and cleaned up the blood. The group of friends would have been one of the only people to have seen the most as perhaps the victim didn't have many friends.