Film update!

So.. we showed our teacher our film so that we could get some feedback. I knew personally that there was something not right about it and we needed to change some parts however I didn't expect her to say that we should remove the whole first part of our film (in the house). I was a little shocked at first and was unsure what I could do to fix it, however with some help I came up with the idea of showing some home video clips of the character 'Rachel Matthews' as a child. My friend who is luckily called Rachel let me use some clips of her when she was younger. During the next week or so, I plan on going into school to edit in these clips and change the titles and music to make our piece seem more scary and suited to our genre.Also, I like the idea of having some titles explaining what has happened eg. "Rachel Matthews was last seen on the 2nd April 2016 by her parents. She had previously said that she was going to school but never showed up" etc. This has previously been seen in films such as Devil Inside.